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Rainy Days (Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic)

Author: TheLastPilot

FanFiction ID: 11588623

Status: Complete (10 Chapters)

My rating: 5 of 5

Cat Noir adores Ladybug, has fallen for her utterly, but the truth is that he barely knows her, doesn’t know her true identity and all the tiny personal details that go along with that at all. Meanwhile, Adrien (Cat Noir’s true identity) finds himself fascinated and troubled by the quiet, sweet girl at school who can’t seem to bring herself to even talk to him, even though she’s clearly smart, funny, and even courageous when around other classmates. Perhaps these rainy days (both literally and metaphorically) will give Adrien and Marinette the chance to get to know each other, to become friends even if they can’t become boyfriend and girlfriend as Marinette would like. Secret identities have a way of getting in the way of relationships. Yet in spite of that, the two find themselves drawn to each other, both in their true identities and in their superhero alter egos. Talk about confusion! Maybe one of these rainy days, they’ll trust each other enough disclose some of those secrets.

Rainy Days is exactly what I wanted in a Miraculous fanfic! The writing is well done, balancing the different perspectives well and including the kind of details that give the story body and depth. The story is adorable and sweet, but with enough conflict and tension to be interesting–properly flangsty (fluffy and angsty). You’ve got a touch of the typical plotlines–rampaging akumatized classmates and the like–which gives the story the proper context and flavor, but the focus of the story isn’t really on that. It’s primarily a story about a budding, beautiful friendship that gradually grows into the potential for something more. The slow-burn growth of Marinette and Adrien’s relationship is a beautiful thing; major kudos to the author for doing this remarkably well. Again, the little details make a huge difference here. At times, the story feels almost like a character study of the main characters, each from the other’s perspective. And can I just say how much I love the way the reveal was handled?! Also, props to the author for managing to craft a story that would appeal to the older viewers of the show while keeping it clean enough for all but the youngest viewers–technically it’s rated T, and there’s a few mild bits of language and a touch of whumpish action right towards the end, but it’s all pretty much PG at the worst. Seriously, Rainy Days is a clean, adorable friendship/romance story that fulfills basically everything I want from a Miraculous fic; highly recommended.

Note: You can find Rainy Days at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11588623/1/Rainy-Days.

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Entertaining Angels (Supernatural Fanfic)

Author: Laura of Maychoria/Maychorian

FanFiction ID: 4674416

Status: Complete (22 Chapters)

My rating: 5 of 5

Warning: Spoilers through 4×10/rated T

Unable to ignore the insistent knocking, Dean Winchester opens the hotel room door in the middle of the night to find a small kid with dark hair and blue eyes staring up at him. Blue eyes that begin to look remarkably familiar as they stare into his own. Because they’re the eyes of the very angel that pulled Dean out of hell less than a year ago. Only, how did Cas who is not only an angel but also an adult the last time Dean checked end up in a little kid body that appears to be all too human? Dean and Sam try to figure it out, but every time Castiel even begins to think about how he ended up this way, he becomes terrified. Time to get help from elsewhere, then, but in the meantime, they’ve got a kid to feed, clothe, and generally take care of . . . and it seems that he’s become awfully attached to Dean.

I absolutely loved this story. I have a weakness for de-aged characters, I know; they’re just too adorable. And this story has just the right amount of cuteness and fluff while still having actual plot as well. It’s a great balance. Human/kid Castiel was really well written, with enough Cas to be believable but enough memory loss and humanity to be really adorable as well. In general, the author just did an amazing job with the characters. The way Dean behaves around the kid is so very Dean–I love how he is around kids in the show, and this fic captures that side of his character so well. The contrast with how Sam handles kids adds an amusing counterpoint, also very in character. The author also has some great insights into other aspects of their characters, like the way the two of them approach jobs and problems differently; it was quite interesting to read. I found the choice of timing (for when this falls in the series) to be interesting as well, both in the fact that they know Cas and have been working with him, but he’s not exactly family yet, and in the way it allows the story to deal with Dean’s guilt over what happened in hell while it’s painfully fresh to him. Added bonus–we get Missouri Moseley and Bobby Singer in the same fic, and both of them are also excellently written and in character. And have I mentioned that the writing itself is just fabulous, fun, and easy to read? Entertaining Angels is an adorable, well-written Supernatural fic that I absolutely recommend, and I will be reading more of this author’s work in the future.

You can find Entertaining Angels at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4674416/1/Entertaining-Angels.

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A Fresh Perspective (Merlin Fanfic)

Author: dr4g0ngrl

FanFiction ID: 8495208

Status: Complete (14 Chapters)

My rating: 5 of 5

An innocuous (if extremely annoying for Merlin) hunting trip with Prince Arthur turns into something drastically different when the two find themselves attacked by a group of sorcerers who manage to shove a suspicious potion down Merlin’s throat. After dealing with their attackers, Arthur turns around to find . . . an unconscious Merlin who is now a little kid of around four years old. Oops. Unsure what to do with a child, Arthur makes the natural decision–take the kid back to his mother. So the two of them show up on Hunith’s doorstep, and Merlin’s poor mom gets dragged into the mess, trying to comfort her confused son while also keeping his magic a secret from Arthur and the rest of the magic-hating world. But for a little child to keep secrets, especially a secret as big as this one, is not exactly easy, and Arthur is in for more than one surprise on his way back to Camelot.

A Fresh Perspective is just about everything I wish for in a fanfic–or in any story, for that matter. The writing flows well, uses excellent grammar, shows a very readable use of third-person narrative, and is just generally pleasant to read. The plot, as the author admits directly, is basically an excuse to write Merlin-as-a-kid fluff. And the result is absolutely adorable. The author’s grasp of Merlin’s character, as well as how that would display as a four-year-old kid, is excellent if flavored towards a highly favorable view of his personality and character (just as I like it). This view of him and his utter devotion to Arthur and to Camelot is vital to the way in which the plot develops, especially after Arthur and the knights discover Merlin’s magic. I also love that the knights (Gwaine, Percival, Elyan, and Leon, specifically) are heavily included in this story, because they’re fabulous and they’re individual reactions to kid-Merlin are important in developing their own personalities, histories, and relationships with each other and with Merlin. The bromance between Merlin and Arthur, as well as between Merlin and Gwaine, is well crafted here, and I think the way in which the author handled that uncertainty of relationship at the point where Merlin is suddenly a child and has no memory of Arthur or Gwaine was very well done. Honestly, I would change nothing about this story, and will probably re-read it many times over. I just want to find more stories by the same author!

Note: You can find A Fresh Perspective at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8495208/1/A-Fresh-Perspective.

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