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If At First You Don’t Succeed (Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic)

Author: Leisey

AO3 ID: 12852174

Status: Complete (oneshot)

My rating: 4 of 5

Rated T–mostly for language

Marinette Dupain-Cheng and Adrien Agreste are madly in love with each other. Duh. It’s so obvious that it’s driving their classmates crazy how oblivious the two are and how resolute they are about not pursuing a relationship with each other. So, they do what any good (and exasperated) classmates would do–band together and try to find a way to get Marinette and Adrien together. Whatever it takes. It might go a bit better if they had a complete set of information to work from . . . like knowing that Marinette and Adrien are secretly Paris’s superhero duo, Ladybug and Chat Noir. Or knowing that Marinette and Adrien know each other’s secret identity and that that’s a major reason for their hesitation. As it is, the class is going crazy . . . and poor Nino just has soooo many questions!

If At First You Don’t Succeed is the sort of fanfic that I can just re-read over and over. It’s cute and fluffy and super amusing. The sheer level of involvement from the class and the increasingly ridiculous strategies they come up with are both impressive and very funny. Almost the entire story is told from the class’s perspective, as opposed to from Marinette or Adrien’s, which is the usual. So kudos to the author for the unique perspective; I really enjoyed that. I also liked the Chloe-redemption aspect of this story–it’s nice to see her growing up a bit. Also loved the group-chat parts of the story. They really bring out the maturity of the whole class (ha ha). But seriously, this whole story is pretty hilarious, definitely good for some serious laughs. Add to that some pretty adorable Adrinette scenes and general awkwardness on the part of our heroes, and you’ve got a great story. Recommended.

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