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Cause for Concern (Fullmetal Alchemist Fanfic)

Author: metisket

AO3 ID: 584736

Status: Complete (1 chapter)

My rating: 5 of 5

Second Lieutenant Jean Havoc has heard all the unbelievable stories about the notorious Elric brothers. As a matter of fact, he’s sought out those stories–they’re quite entertaining. But nothing could possibly have prepared him for the reality of being stuck alone in a car with them.

Cause for Concern is a delightful FMA one-shot fanfic giving us Havoc’s initial impressions on Edward and Alphonse. Because let’s face it, the shock of them gets kind of dulled over time, but meeting them at first has got to be jarring. They really are like some force of nature . . . some really childish force of nature, sometimes. In any case, it’s neat the almost outsider POV that you get, looking in on their lives, but also the way the author has the brothers poking into Havoc’s life and fleshing out his character as well. And the sibling interactions here are fabulous. Also, there are very amusing grumblings about Mustang, made adorable by the brothers’ admission of how they actually appreciate him. And most of all, the entire story is just very, very funny. Highly recommended for FMA fans.

If you’re interested, you can find Cause for Concern at https://archiveofourown.org/works/584736.

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