FanFiction ID: 6319981
Status: Complete (80 Chapters)
My rating: 3.5 of 5
If only Arthur had actually been knocked out like he’d been pretending to be. Then he would never have to have known that Merlin, his manservant (and best friend, if he’d just admit it), has been keeping important secrets from him. Like the fact that he has magic. Which is illegal. In a kingdom where Arthur’s father is the king. Awkward. . . . Now Arthur has to decide how to carry on from here, and Merlin in turn has to determine how to handle Arthur’s newfound knowledge. Of course, if they can work through the initial awkwardness of the situation, hang onto the deep friendship they share, they could turn this transparency between them into something good–maybe even something amazing–for the benefit of Camelot and each other.
Wow, I have to say that the amount of work put into A Question of Motives is impressive. This story follows series 3 of BBC’s Merlin from the latter parts of episode 2 all the way past the end . . . only in this version, Arthur knows all about Merlin’s magic right from the beginning. What’s more, he accepts it and helps Merlin keep his secret! All in all, I think this story is happier and lighter than most of the Merlin fanfics I’ve read (other than the utterly absurd crack ones, obviously). It’s serious, and when events in the show become dark, this fanfic does as well, but it’s lacking the typical angst that is so very common in this particular fandom. And while I do love the angst, I found A Question of Motives to be a welcome change. It’s engaging and adventurous, full of friendship and laughter. The author does a great job of altering events in the story to fit with Arthur’s newfound knowledge and the growing group of people involved in Merlin’s secret, slipping original episodes in amongst the canon show episodes and even introducing some charming OCs (yes, I do love Liam!). The only things about this story that were awkward or strange to me were: 1) The author has a way of saying “was stood” when you would usually hear “stood” or “was standing.” I’ve seen a few other authors do this, and I’m wondering if it’s a regional thing . . . but it sounds kind of odd to me. No biggie, though. 2) Uther is too nice and understanding. Of course, it could be that the Uther we see in the show is too polarized and we’re missing this side of him. It was nice to see him being nice on occasion. Just kind of unsettling as well. 3) There was an almost RPG feel to the way that Merlin and his gang acquired new skills, party members, status, etc. Not that that’s a bad thing, it was just kind of noticeable. Still, none of these things was outstanding enough to spoil my enjoyment of a fun and well-written fanfic, which A Question of Motives definitely is. It looks like the author has some other fics connected to this one, and while I haven’t read any of them yet, I will try to point out those connections when I get a chance.
Note: You can find A Question of Motives at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6319981/1/A-Question-of-Motives.